Writing Internet Sales Pages That Sell

 GRAB THE HEADLINES

The first basic element of an effective Internet marketing (IM) sales page 

is the headline. Just like a newspaper sells based on the front-page 

headlines, your IM sales page is going to get viewers on the basis of the 

main headline. Thus, you have to be sure to make this as persuasive as 

possible while listing in one sentence the single biggest benefit your 

product or service has to offer to the potential customer.

FONT SIZE MATTERS

Whatever your headline, you want it to be written in the biggest font 

found anywhere on the sales page. That means that it is meant to grab 

attention, and using the size of the font this way really sets it apart. Don't 

be too creative on the font type, as you want to make it very easy to 

read; however, be very careful to make it the biggest text on the page, as 

that does matter.

USE A BIG TRIGGER

There are numerous psychological triggers that will produce an immediate 

reaction with your audience. You should study these triggers, understand 

the demographic you are marketing to, and then choose one that is more 

apt to appeal to your market segment. For instance, say you are selling a 

product that could have many competitors in the market. So, you want to 

make sure that whomever lands on your sales page that they order from 

you, rather than taking the time to scope out the competitors and 

compare offers. You find that your demographic consists of business 

people who are used to deadlines and want to get a good deal. So, you 

implement a time limited offer to trigger buying behavior now and make it 

uncomfortable for them to take the time to look elsewhere for fear of 

losing out on a great deal. In that case, you list your biggest benefit, but 

you also make it clear that the offer is only available for the next 12 hours 

or until the product is sold out.

THE THREE-HEADLINER STRATEGY

Some marketers like to make use of a three-headliner strategy. In this 

example, you have a pre-headline to introduce the main headline. It is not 

as big as the main headline and doesn't necessarily list the biggest 

benefit. It just sets the customer up to read the second, and main, 

headline. The second headline is the one with the biggest benefit and 

trigger. It should be a statement or offer that immediately provokes an

emotional response. After that, there is a final headline that is much 

smaller and that gives any additional information to clarify the main 

headline. This approach works well and provides more space to be 

thorough with your main headline.

INTRODUCTION AND TYPES 

OF TRIGGERS

Every good news story starts with a hook, and your sales page will also 

want to implement this technique. A hook can be one or two sentences 

that really grab the imagination and attention of the reader. There is a 

real art to creating effective hooks, but mainly it is something that will 

cause the reader to pause slightly and that will trigger an emotional 

response. If the hook is effective, it does just what its namesake says: It 

hooks the reader into reading the rest of your sales page.

Let's be clear here. No one likes to spend a lot of time reading sales 

letters. Generally, a large number of people out there find reading to be a 

chore. So, you have to make it interesting and exciting. You have to get 

the reader to want to read the rest of the story. Without the hook, the 

headline isn't enough. You have to take into account the way people skim 

a story or sales page to decide whether it's worth reading thoroughly. 

First, they read the headline. If that grabs them, they will read the first 

few sentences. Then, they will most likely skip to the bullet points or the 

subheadings to decide whether to dive into the sales letter deeper. If your 

first few sentences are a bore, that's about the time you will lose that Web 

surfer to some other Internet marketer. You have to make those first few 

sentences count because that may be the only thing a visitor reads to 

decide whether to go on with your offer or not. That's why using 

psychological triggers to provoke a response is very, very important.

TYPES OF TRIGGERS

As a sales person, you have to know that people buy on impulse many 

times. They may give you a rational explanation after the sales is 

completed, but ultimately, much buying behavior is an emotional response 

to a particular marketing trigger. Some of the triggers you can use are:

 Ease of use

If you've found a solution to a problem that seriously uncomplicates 

people's lives, you will get a lot of sales.

Status

If your demographic is wealthy, then they may be seeking status 

symbols to set themselves apart from common folk. 

 Belonging

People join all kinds of groups where they feel a sense of 

community or belonging. If you can tie your product or service to 

some group identity that is large and lucrative, you can get quite a 

number of sales using this trigger.

 Risk Aversion 

If your customer stands to lose by not taking you up on a time 

limited or quantity limited offer, they will bite to close the sale more 

often than not.

ESTABLISH CREDIBILITY

When someone visits a sales page, they may not have any idea who you 

are or why they should buy from you. In order to make a case that you 

are indeed trustworthy, you have to either list your credentials or get 

other people to vouch for you. There are a number of different ways you 

can convince the average visitor that you are a genuine businessperson 

and not just some Internet scam artist. Here are a few good ways to 

reduce the resistance to buy from you, simply because they don't quite 

know who you are or whether your business is legitimate.

FLAUNT YOUR CREDENTIALS

If you have degrees, teach seminars, written a book, or done anything 

that can establish a personal connection and authority on the subject you 

are selling, be sure to flaunt it. Nothing sells better than a person who is 

keenly involved in the field that they promote.

PROVIDE TESTIMONIALS

You can write up testimonials that others provide to you. Preferably, they 

should include real results, not just gushing admiration. In order to give 

them authenticity, ask permission from the person who offers the 

testimonial to reprint their quote with their full name. Adding a city and 

state also gives it more credibility.

POINT TO FAVORABLE REVIEWS

Did someone else give your products, service, or business a review? If it 

was favorable, post a link to it on your sales page so that they can see 

that you really are who you say you are and can provide what you say you 

do. If you don't want to post a link, quote the article and list the reference 

that gave you the review.

GIVE OUT CONTACT INFORMATION

This seems very simple, but many IM people bypass it for fear of being 

“too available.” You don't have to give out a physical address, but having 

a phone number or email address where people can reach you to ask pre-

sales questions is good. It shows that you are an actual live person who is 

doing business online and not just some scam website.

SHOOT OUT THOSE BENEFITS!

When someone asks you why they should buy your product or service, it's 

a good thing to have tons of benefits ready to list. Benefits sell products, 

as any good marketer knows. You can't have too many benefits, so don't 

be afraid of listing too many. How you list those benefits is just as 

important as what you list. 

BULLETED LISTS

If you go through a number of Internet marketing sales pages, you'll find 

they almost all have one thing in common: a bulleted list of benefits. This 

is the best way to list your benefits because of the way people scan a 

sales page before deciding what to read. The bulleted list makes it easy to 

scan the major benefits and then read any details if the main benefit is 

appealing. 

ORDER IS IMPORTANT

The order of the bulleted items is important too. You want to list the 

biggest benefits first and work your way down. Again, this is because 

people tend to start to read and then lose interest the more they read. So, 

to keep them reading, put the juicier benefits at the top and work your 

way to the weakest benefits at the bottom of the list.

WHY MORE IS BETTER

You might think that listing two whole pages of benefits is a bad idea. 

Actually, there is no way to list too many benefits. The reason for that is 

that you don't know why someone has landed on your sales page or what 

trigger will make someone push the “Buy” button. Since you aren't a 

virtual sales agent, your copy has to do the job of overcoming all 

objections for you. You aren't there to hear the objections running 

through the visitor’s head. Only he/she knows what those objections are, 

and so the copy has to address each and every objection someone might 

have by listing all of the benefits the product can create in a person's life. 

Eventually, as the visitor reads the list, he/she will come upon the benefit 

that may be the biggest trigger for him/her, but it may be placed further 

down the list. There's no way to know what exactly triggers that particular 

individual, but when he/she gets to that benefit, that may be enough to 

sell him/her on your product. So, be sure to list as many benefits as you 

can think of, even if the list runs several pages. If the visitor doesn't want 

to read them, he’ll/she'll simply scroll onto the next subheading.


EXPLAIN YOUR 

FEATURES OR 

SPECIFICATIONS 

THOROUGHLY

Have you noticed that, so far, we really haven't explained much about the 

product or service we are selling? That's because you're not trying to sell 

a product or service; you are trying to sell benefits. Benefits sell products, 

and once the decision to buy has been made (which is typically an 

emotional response), then you can start to list the features or 

specifications of the product or service in detail.

If you were to try doing it the other way around, you would more than 

likely bore people to tears. Ever have the uncomfortable experience of 

walking into an electronics store and being assailed by a tech geek trying 

to sell you the latest computer based on the features and specs of the 

machine? 

Odds are, you don't know why you'd want a certain speed of machine, 

why one video resolution is better than another, or what any of those 

weird terms the guy is spouting mean. It's just plain awkward. You aren't 

there to buy a particular machine based on the specs and features. You 

are there to buy a machine that solves your problems and makes your life 

easier. 

If those features and specs do that, great! But no one wants to know how 

they work; they just want things to work. They also definitely don't want 

to have to guess from the features of specifications how that machine is 

going to work out for them. They want to be told how it solves their 

problems and benefits them personally. The same is true of any sales 

copy you write to sell products or services on the Internet. Benefits sell; 

product features and specifications should be detailed, but only after the 

benefits are listed and clearly explained.

BE PRECISE AND HONEST

No matter what you are selling, try to give a very thorough detailing of 

the products and specifications. Are you selling a CD set of seminars for 

financial investing? Then clearly state how many CDs are in the set, how 

many hours of seminars they'll enjoy, and what types of exercises or 

teaching is involved. Don't just detail the products, though. Get them to



understand how they can expect to receive the product and the timetable 

for delivery.

Whatever you promise in the features and specifications should be exactly 

what you deliver. If you want a repeat customer, don't try to con anyone 

into buying something that is actually less than what you've stated. 

Particularly in these harsh economic times where no one wants to lose 

money, delivering a product or service that actually exceeds the 

customer's expectation is the best way to retain loyal customers. That's 

what you want at a time when paying customers can be sparse and hard 

to find.

INCLUDE POWERFUL IMAGES

The Internet is the perfect medium, not just for sales copy, but also for 

inserting images that create that emotional reaction that is going to lead 

to a sale. People tend to react much more strongly to images than to 

words, and while people can escape from reading your copy by scanning 

the page, it's not possible with images. If you want to really grab the 

reader and make him/her want to read your copy, be sure to add some 

powerful images to the sales letter. Here is the correct way to do this.

THE TOP OF YOUR SALES PAGE

Add a banner image that can really spur the imagination of your reader 

and get him/her excited about your copy. It's not enough to just put a 

logo or a bland image of your product; instead, tie it into your headline. 

Are you talking about how the biggest benefit of your product is that it 

keeps you from wasting paper? Why not show an image of someone 

drowning in paper and trying to find that one piece of paper they need to 

complete a project. Then, the headline can tie into the picture with the 

benefit that relates to the picture.

SPREAD THROUGHOUT THE COPY

Add images every couple of pages or so to bring the reader through your 

copy as he/she scans the sales page. Be sure to put a witty subheading on 

the image to bring out the point you are trying to make. Keep these 

images much smaller than the banner image as they are meant to draw 

the reader further into the copy, not to hog the limelight or steal the 

show.

USING TRIGGERS WITH IMAGES

Some of the ways to impact the psychology of the reader who visits your 

sales page is to use visual triggers. Humor is a sure way to draw the 

reader into your copy; just be careful not to make it crass, unprofessional, 

or so simplistic that it insults the reader. There's a fine line between 

humor and disgust. 

Hitting the right note can lead to a wonderful way to connect to the reader 

and bring them into a more intimate relationship with your products and 

services. The best types of humor are the ones that take some common 

facet of human behavior and lightly pokes fun at it. It immediately brings 

in the reader who can relate to the image and helps to put them in 

position of being able to laugh at the human condition. It's absurd, but it 

can also be an opportunity to sell your biggest benefit if your products or 

services are able to confront that situation and provide a result.

PROMOTE VALUE OFFERS

AND BONUSES

During tough economic times, the single biggest marketing strategy is to 

provide value. Consumers, these days, are seeking value like they haven't 

since the advent of the Great Depression. It's not enough that your 

product has the best features in the market; it has to be the best value 

too. That means that you will have to prove to the visitor who stops by 

your sales page that he/she is getting exceptional value for his/her 

money. There are several ways to do this without actually having to come 

out and compete on price.

INCREASE PERCEIVED VALUE

Value is very subjective. Often, it's not price that determines value; it's 

the quality of the offer. That's why benefits sell. The more benefits 

something provides, the higher the perceived value of a product. To 

increase perceived value, you want to make sure that you provide much 

more product, or quality of product, for the price than what your 

competitors are willing to provide. Bonuses to the offer, especially when 

you use the word “free,” tend to really excite customers who love getting 

something extra for nothing. It's also a great way to increase the 

perceived value of an offering.



SOME VALUES THAT ARE IMPORTANT NOW

Also, the type of benefit is important when determining value. You won't 

find many people wanting to buy housing as an investment right now. 

However, housing as shelter is a good value in many depressed markets. 

How you frame the offer to get it to sell is dependent on the value that 

the consumer wants, not the value that your product actually has in the 

marketplace. So, frame your offer using some desirable values in today's 

marketplace: economy, frugality, longevity, quality, smart buys. Things 

like convenience or luxury just aren't good values to sell on right now 

when money is so tight that people are willing to give these features up to 

get better value for their money.

PRICE IS IMPORTANT, BUT...

It's not the only thing. Don't compete on price to raise the value of your 

offering. This is financial suicide. If everyone competes on price, there will 

be very little profit to be made and you'll soon be out of business. 

Instead, focus on adding value through things that cost little money, but 

create an impression of high value, like infoproducts, higher customer 

service, and potential usefulness and longevity of your offerings.

MAINTAIN A SUITABLE 

ONLINE PRESENCE

If you are selling computers, your online presence will want to focus on an 

image of professionalism and efficiency. If you are selling skateboards 

online, the image you want is to be fun and up on the latest skating 

trends. You want your online persona to be authentic, and also suitable to 

the market niche if you are using it to sell your products or services. Not 

everyone wants to be known as an expert in the products and services 

they target, but those that do have to pay special attention to this area. 

Online consumers are very savvy, and putting your name in a search 

engine is going to bring up everything you've got online. Don't try to play 

games by presenting one online image one place and another somewhere 

else. Be as authentic as possible and develop your credibility this way. At 

the very least, keep from associating with other people of dubious 

character or whose values contradict with those of the image you are 

trying to present for yourself personally or for your business.




AUTHENTICITY COUNTS

You may have a profile on several social networking sites. If that's the 

case, you know that authenticity counts. You can't put up a fake name, 

fake interests, or fake credentials and not eventually be tripped up by it. 

People talk about other people, and you want to make sure that what's 

being said about, particularly online, is positive and beneficial to your 

business. The way to ensure that is to be as honest and open as you can 

be about who you are and what your products and services are about.

SPONSORED OR CELEBRITY TESTIMONIALS

Some people pay for testimonials to help them achieve instant credibility 

in the eyes of the public. Sometimes, it is a venture partner who wants to 

promote your products and services for free because they benefit him too 

and he has more experience and credibility in the field than you. Having 

his or her name in a testimonial can generate sales. Other times, you get 

people to sponsor your products because they are a celebrity. Either way, 

if something happens that makes that celebrity or sponsor appear to 

violate the professional image you need to sell your products, you have to 

remove their testimonials and sever the relationship with them. Only 

associate with people who can promote the image you need to be 

consistent in the values you are promoting. Bad press for them can 

definitely mean bad press for you and loss of sales. Guard your 

professional online reputation very well by making sure the things being 

said online about you are positive.

ORDERING: A CALL TO 

ACTION

Every sales page should have a call to action. You might think that visitors 

have enough self-initiative to find the “Buy Now” button and click on it. 

Often, that's not the case. People should be led every step of the way 

through your sales page so that they know what's expected of them and 

what you can offer them in return. It may seem simplistic, but asking for 

the sale is one of the most important things you need in your sales page. 

It can literally double your effectiveness by making that call to action.

MAKE ORDERING EASY TO SPOT



It's never too early to ask for the sale on a sales page. You want to ask 

for it at the very top after your headline and subheading. You want to ask 

for it midway through the sales page at regular intervals and you want to 

ask for it at the very end too. In order to make it easy to spot, you want 

to create buttons that graphically indicate a “clickable” spot on the page. 

You can do the same with a text link, but a “Buy Now” button is far more 

effective, both visually and logically.

MAKE IT SIMPLE ENOUGH FOR A CHILD

You want to give really clear instructions for the ordering process. It 

should be as if someone who has never ordered online suddenly found 

your site and wanted to order. How would you explain the ordering 

process to them? This is the way you want to make things: Simple enough 

for a child to understand how to order. You should have step-by-step 

instructions that are very easy to follow and leave no room for 

misunderstanding.

GIVE NUMEROUS PAYMENT OPTIONS

Especially during the recession, fewer and fewer people want to break out 

the credit cards, or they have lost their credit. Make sure you offer 

multiple ways to make a payment. Offer PayPal for those with online 

PayPal accounts. Include directions for people who might want to pay over 

the phone or who want to mail in a check. If there are additional fees for 

International orders, be sure that you are clear on that. 

People who want to buy something from another country often use 

PayPal, as the money can be directly converted into dollars or other 

denominations from their account. Offer payment plans, if that's possible, 

as this can be a very popular feature during tough economic times. You'll 

even see retail stores offering layaway, something unheard of when store 

credit was easier to get. Whatever way you can make it easy, offering

more payment options to help the customer make the choice to buy is 

going to help your bottom line. 

CLOSING THE SALE

If after reading everything, or at least the important pieces of your sales 

page, and your visitor is still musing over the sale, you need to try one 

last time to close that sale. This would be in your final paragraph or two 

and it/they should be as convincing as you can make it. In these


paragraphs, summarize the most important points of your sales letters. 

Try to reiterate the best benefit and hit a couple of psychological triggers 

that make it uncomfortable for the reader to leave the page without giving 

your offer a second thought. After making your final appeal, again, ask for 

the sale. 

SOME TECHNICAL FEATURES TO HELP

There are some technical features you can implement on your sales page 

that can help you close that sale. One of them is a simple pop-up screen 

that asks the visitor to rethink the offer before leaving. This can be 

annoying for some people; some people may even have pop-ups disabled 

on their computers. It is worth a try and can be an effective way to try to 

generate one last interaction with the visitor before he/she moves off of 

your sales page.

Another technical feature that is less intrusive is a chat window that is 

available to the person who still has some pre-sales inquiries. You don't 

necessarily have it come up when they move off your sales page, but you 

make sure they know that you have customer service representatives who 

will talk them through the offer if they still have questions. This is a very 

effective way to close a sale as it is much harder to say “no” to a real live 

person than it is to say “no” to your copy. 

If you have the money to hire representatives who can close the sale, it 

can be a great way to generate business. It's also considered far less 

intrusive because the visitor makes the decision to chat by clicking the 

link available in the closing statement, rather than having some offensive 

pop-up demanding their attention when they try to leave. Some people 

get so offended by the pop-ups that they decide not to come back, but it's 

still a good way to try to catch people before they leave.

FIND EXAMPLES AND SPLIT TEST

One of the best ways to find out how to write effective sales pages is to 

take a close look at the ones that inspire you to buy. Just hop online and 

start to do your own research by visiting your competitors’ sites and 

seeing how they have built their pages to generate sales. There's no 

reason you can't use some of their strategies on your own pages. You 

may even discover some psychological triggers you weren't aware of, but 

that are very effective for your market niche. Just be sure not to copy 

their sales copy verbatim. That's called plagiarism. 

Instead, look for the ideas behind the words and the marketing strategies 

they are using. Then, build your own sales pages with your own words 

and images to help you achieve even better results. If you're not sure 

what's working, you can always do a split test and set up two versions of 

the same offer.

Direct half of your traffic with a small piece of code on a re-direct page to 

one offer and the other half to the other sales page. The one sales page 

that creates better results is the best format. This way, you can 

continuously improve the design and effectiveness of your sales page by 

trying out different techniques. Start slowly by changing just one element 

of the sales page if you are doing a split test, like offering two versions 

with a different headline. Once you do that test and figure out which 

headline works best, you can move on to a split test on the call-to-action 

element. Slowly, you will get a better idea of what works for your 

demographic and products in a way that is uniquely suited to your 

business and product offerings